1.What's in Picture Four?
Four应该大写字母开头。
2.Excuse me. Is it an egg?
Egg前面要加an。
3.This is my teacher.
This is不能连在一起。
4.Hi Peter.Let's play football/a football game together.
如果加a后面就要加game,不能说玩一个橄榄球,只能说玩一场橄榄球比赛或者直接玩橄榄球。5.-Goodbye,Miss Green.-Goodbye,Yang Hong.
人名Green要大写开头。
6.There is a shop near my home.
Shop是名词前面要加定冠词a。
7.Cake and drink.
这句没看出来问题。(不是一句完整的话)
8.My mother often buys things from the shop on Saturdays.
第三人称buy后面要加s,因为是每个星期六,Saturday后面也要加s。
9.The people in the shop are very friendly.
People是复数,用are而不是is。
10.They often help people carry the heavy.
Help拼错了,Put应该是carry吧(我认为,是帮着搬的意思)。
11.Things in their cars and on their bikes.
不完整。
12.But don't forget,the shop is not open until eight o'clock in the evening.
Open这里是形容词,不加s。想说在什么之前不用before,用until(直到。。)。
14.It closes at eight o'clock in the evening.
说时间的时候用at。
15.It sells many things like bread and milk.
很多东西用many。