写一篇英语作文 星期天和父母一起去动物园 全家人喜欢的动物是 。。。。60词作业 帮我吧 我一定采纳

1 my parents 应该用 复数 and I 而不是me
2,上面给出的那句 I nearly believed my eyes ,用错了 nearly是 几乎 差不多的意思 所以 应该是 I can't even believe my eyes
3。It is so cool 原句少了系动词
4 those cute pandas attracted my father so much that he cant even make a move 应该比总是用 eye 什么好一点
5 my mother 那句后面加个In a word, we had a great day .再说Two 那句 会有个过度吧。
总之希望对你有所帮助 ，对上位仁兄也无冒犯之意 。

One day,my parent and me went to the zoo.At first,i saw the tiger.I nearly belived my eyes.It so cool.The panada caught my father's eye.My mother liked horses.
Two hours ago,we came back home.